The magazine advert on the left was my first draft. However, upon audience feedback it was clear to me that it lacked consistency with the album cover, for example; the font group was different and so was the colour palette. In order to correct this I made the red in 'Infinity' the same red that was used on the album cover and I also corrected its font. I also made the tag line yellow, the same shade of yellow that is used on the backdrop. Additionally, I made the grey smoke a blue/turquoise colour to match the backdrop also. As well as this, I added the company logo "Panz Entertainment" next to the distributing company logo in the bottom right corner as it was featured on the album cover.
This made my magazine advert more consistent and allows the imagery to flow and become more pleasing for my target audience to view.
